Friday 6 March 2009

Voiceover

We've made adjustments to our script for the voiceover in light of our decision of the title being the lead female's name. We've decided that in order to show the audience this is her name from the beginning the last thing she says, after the fight and right before the title will be "I know who i am". The rest of the script will have only minor adjustments and will be as follows:

EXT. Playground
(Girl,, sitting alone)

Voice over:
What am i?
(gap of silence)
Why am I here?
(gap of silence)
What's going on?

the fight scene will then begin, and as she walks away the last line of the voiceover will be:
"i know who i am"

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